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LONLINESS
Have you ever felt alone?
You feel as if, you are not known
Outside, you don’t show much pain
But inside, you are going insane
Don’t worry, people are with you
Many others feel this way too
Correct, it is called loneliness
Your life seems like a great big mess
Lots of people may pick on you
Do you know what you should do?
Of course you want it all to stop
If it doesn’t, you might give up and drop
You might be so mad
Even though you are sad
Yes it is my wish
To end this loneliness
pretty crazy how much ive changed
Sounds like you were pretty depressed back then
I really like how u started it, but the end doesnt really make sense tbh..
Sounds like you didn't know the basics of poetry yet. I assume you are loads better now? ;)
It sounded like a suicide note tbh.
Yea i agree have are you still lonely?
Maybe post it in the creative writing section?
Either way you sound pretty down. Talk to you rents bro
I hope you have changed, this actually reminds me of myself when I was in the 6th grade. I hope you gave changed as I have And that you Are not lonely anymore
=( Pretty depressing, hopefully you're not lonely now :3
Perhaps you didn't truly realize you confidence, its okay, young people mostly have trouble.